Could do better
Nice to see another episode, I hope you keep doing this and it turns into a big part of NG. But I was disappointed.
What this submission lacks is animation...well, they're comics, but still...you need more animation. It looks like you could've done better.
Another thing is that the graphics were very poor.
This is to the artists that appear in the submission: You have one whole week to do it..don't rush it. You have more than enough time to do better drawings.
I hope I see improvements next Sunday.
-ElMaster-